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K.turner



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PostSubject: please help!   Wed Dec 30, 2009 9:11 am

mr hendricks

:?:I was wondering if you could help me, i need help or an idea in how to set out my conclusion for the last paragraph in my 'Rear Window' coursework. i have worked around the title 'How does Hitchcock create tension in the rear window?'. I have done all the other paragraphs, im just a bit stuck on that one. scratch
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PostSubject: Re: please help!   Mon Jan 18, 2010 2:34 am

In your conclusion you need to go over the main points of your essay and bring them all together in a final summary, which 'ties up' all thje main points you made.

You need to remember your rhetorical devices, so for example you could begin the paragraph with the phrase 'Ultimately,....' in order to give it that summing up feel.

So ity could look something like this:

"Ultimately, Hitchcock creates tension through a variety of techniches such as....."
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